英语老师在批注作业时常用的评语类型及示例如下:
一、整体评价类
高度赞扬 "Your sentence structure is impeccable! / Your vocabulary range is astonishing!"(你的句法无懈可击!/ 你的词汇量令人惊叹!)
"This essay demonstrates exceptional critical thinking skills."(这篇文章展现了卓越的批判性思维能力。)
鼓励进步
"Keep up the good work! Your improvement is evident."(继续保持!你的进步显而易见。)
"With a bit more practice, your writing will reach new heights."(再练练,你的写作将更上一层楼。)
二、具体技能类
语法与拼写
"Your grammar is spot on! / There are a few minor spelling errors, but overall well done."(你的语法完全正确!/ 仅有个别拼写错误,但整体完成得很好。)
"Notice the variety in your sentence structures! It adds depth to your writing."(注意你句子结构的多样性!这为你的写作增添了深度。)
词汇与表达
"You've used some very vivid vocabulary! / Your phrasing is both clear and creative."(你使用了一些非常生动的词汇!/ 你的措辞既清晰又富有创意。)
"Try to incorporate more idiomatic expressions to enrich your language."(尝试加入更多习语表达以丰富你的语言。)
三、行为与态度类
学习态度
"You always show enthusiasm for learning! / Your dedication to improving is commendable."(你总是对学习充满热情!/ 你努力提高的态度值得称赞。)
"Remember to proofread your work; attention to detail is key."(记得校对作业;细节决定成败。)
团队协作
"Your participation in group activities is very active! / You're a great team player."(你在小组活动中的表现非常积极!/ 你是个出色的团队成员。)
"How can we encourage more students to share their ideas like you?"(我们怎样能鼓励更多学生像你一样分享想法?)
四、改进建议类
"Try to vary your sentence lengths for better readability."(尝试调整句子长度以提高可读性。)
"For complex topics, it might help to outline your thoughts before writing."(对于复杂话题,写作前先列提纲可能有所帮助。)
注意事项
使用学生能理解的英语,避免过度使用学术化表达;
采用"三明治"评价法:先肯定优点,再提出建议,最后鼓励进步;
结合学生具体作品分析,避免泛泛而谈。